We have been reading a book called The Recruit by Robert Muchamore. We had some activities to do, Ryan and I made a poster about and organization called CHERUB, which is a secret agent organization with kids as the spies.
Hi Alex, Liam Here. I like the green background and the big heading makes it stand out. Next time maybe try to find a transparent background for the shirts.
Hi Alex, you've created a very clear poster which is easy to follow. I wonder if we should have coloured shirts at school, if we did which colour would you be? Mrs Hahn
Hi Alex, Amelia here from Awahono School. I like how you have laid out your drawing nice and big so you can see it clearly. I also like how it stands out and catches my eye so I want to look at it. Maybe next time you could explain how it works, also in your blurb in the second sentence you have put and instead of an .It reminds me of a rainbow because of all the different colours. Great job Alex!
Hello Alex. I am Cameron from Lake Brunner School. You have put a bright colour for the background it makes the images stand out more. I like how you have labelled where the start is and it is easy to how to tell what colour is the highest rank and what colour is the lowest. Next time you could explain why the colours simple that rank. How do the kids start the club?
Hi Alex, Liam Here. I like the green background and the big heading makes it stand out. Next time maybe try to find a transparent background for the shirts.
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Hi, Liam, thanks for your comment.
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Hi Alex, you've created a very clear poster which is easy to follow. I wonder if we should have coloured shirts at school, if we did which colour would you be?
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Hi, Mrs Hahn, Thanks for your comment. I'd be a grey or navy shirt.
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Hi Alex, Amelia here from Awahono School. I like how you have laid out your drawing nice and big so you can see it clearly. I also like how it stands out and catches my eye so I want to look at it. Maybe next time you could explain how it works, also in your blurb in the second sentence you have put and instead of an .It reminds me of a rainbow because of all the different colours. Great job Alex!
ReplyDeleteHi, Amelia, thanks for you comment! It's meant to be an and, In Ryan and I, I don't think its meant to be, Ryan an I. Anyway.
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Hello Alex. I am Cameron from Lake Brunner School. You have put a bright colour for the background it makes the images stand out more. I like how you have labelled where the start is and it is easy to how to tell what colour is the highest rank and what colour is the lowest. Next time you could explain why the colours simple that rank. How do the kids start the club?
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