We are learning to write a report. First we had to find out about the kakapo. After that we put our information on a Padlet then we wrote a plan then we started to write our report and we wrote it in paragraphs. Once we wrote it we put it on a slideshow. This is my slideshow.
Hi Alex, your information is very clear and easy to read on the dark background. I also like your choice of background picture as it suits the topic. I think it would be better just to have the title own its on the first slide. Maybe you could write, "Hope you enjoy my slideshow," at the top when you are telling us about your learning. Also, maybe you could find space on your map slide to write on the names of the islands at the ends of the arrows. It was a great idea to include a map and to show where the islands are. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Idle, thanks for the comment. Next time I'll put Hope you enjoy in the top. I will put the names of the Islands names on soon.
Deletegood story about the kakapo it is very good and describing
ReplyDeleteHi Nathaniel thanks for your commment, glad you enjoyed.
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