Wednesday 9 May 2018

M alliteration poem

For writing we had to make a poem based on F is For Fox by Carol Ann Duffy. We made a poem like F is For Fox but we used m instead of f.


M is for Mannequin, Moon and Max

Max marched to the movies.
Watching a posed mannequin stand motionlessly.

Magical mysteriousness managed to happen
 As the mannequin came to life.

Magical medicine shins in the mixing bowl

And matching the magical medicine colour.

Max marched to the moon.

Trying to manage to escape the mimicking mad mannequin.

The mannequin marched after max matching his every step.

Moon rocks fall to the misty ground.

The moon rocks fall

Missing max and the mannequin by a mosquitoes length.

Magic mist turned a flat moon into a muddy meadow.

Max mastered martial arts making the mannequin seem harmless. 

Max attacked the now motionless mannequin.

The mannequin was mangled motionlessly.



“Mannequin be gone”

2 comments:

  1. Hi Alex, Jake here, I really like your m Alliteration poem. You really had a good go at fitting in lots of m's. But have you ever thought of making your writing bigger? Keep up the great work!
    Kind regards
    -Jake

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  2. Hi Jake, Alex here. Thanks for your comment.
    Kind regards
    -Alex

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