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Hi Isabel here. I like your poem maybe next time you could use son because you used the word child a lot.
Hi Isabel I can't really use son because the whole purpose is he's alone.
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Hi Isabel here. I like your poem maybe next time you could use son because you used the word child a lot.
ReplyDeleteHi Isabel I can't really use son because the whole purpose is he's alone.
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