Alex @ Awahono School: I am...

Friday, 5 May 2017

We are learning to describe in a poem. I wrote a poem about myself and we followed a structure which was I am the ... who. This is my poem.

I am

I am the brother who builds a tree house with my siblings.

I am the farmer who cleans the cattle yards.

I am the swimmer who rockets down the pool in backstroke.

I am the son who loves to annoy Mum when she is lying on the couch reading.

I am the scout who loves to play games.

I am the soccer player who likes playing midfielder.

I am the grandson who likes to watch You tube at my Nana’s.

I am the cousin who watches my little cousin Theo.

I am Alex

Nag2Friday, May 05, 2017
I really enjoyed reading your poem Alex. Building a tree house sounds like fun.
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AnonymousMonday, May 08, 2017
Dear Alex, what a great job you did on your "I Am" poem. Your poem revealed a lot about yourself, after reading it I feel like I know you so much better. I didn't know that you were a soccer player or a scout, now I do!
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AnonymousThursday, May 11, 2017
Dear Alex what a great job you did okamazing After i read it was good as gold I loved it so much good job
from hannah At awahono school
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