In Room Five for Infobytes, we read about Pompeii. Miro, Ryan and I have made a slide show as if we were someone who had survived the disaster of Mt Vesuvius. This is it, hope you enjoy it! It's written like it was a diary. (Sorry about the slow rotations on the slides.)
This story is a great collaborative effort from the three of you, and I like that you recorded yourselves reading it. You told us a lot about how the narrator felt in your story, which is great as it makes the reader more able to imagine what it must have been like.
ReplyDeleteSomething for next time: think the words "I felt" in your head and write the sentence without using those words, eg Water washed into the small boat. The cuts on my feet stung.